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Guest Post: Self-Published Fiction and the Quest for Quality – Part Two

18 Wednesday May 2016

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Indie Writer, Self Published Book, Self-Published Fantasy Blog-off, Speculative Fiction

Book bloggers are lucky in that talented authors often send us a copy of their book to read and review. It’s a mutually beneficial scenario wherein the blogger gets a good story while the author gets their work trumpeted to the blogger’s audience. But what about readers who are just looking for a good read in their favorite genre and aren’t sure where to go looking? How do they find something that will satisfy their desire for a well-told tale?

Author Aderyn Wood tackles this subject of quality from a reader’s perspective in follow up to a guest post she did here back in December (Click here to read Part One)

They’re all yours Aderyn! *Passes mic*

The self-publishing revolution has destabilized the deeply entrenched gatekeepers of the traditional publishing world, and now there is a growing mountain of books for readers to choose from. This change in the publishing landscape has its pros and cons, and just in case you’ve been living under a rock and don’t know them, here they are:

The Pros? According to Best Fantasy Books, the benefits of reading Indie books are threefold.

  • Firstly, there’s the “thrill of the hunt” – the chance to find a potential bestseller before anyone else. This is particularly tempting for book bloggers and reviewers. Imagine if you were the first to review The Martian!
  • Secondly, you can find “a wide variety of eclectic fiction that you’d never ever see published the traditional way” – Western Sci Fi anyone?
  • And thirdly, Indie books are generally much cheaper than their traditionally published counterparts.

The second point resonates most strongly with many readers. Traditional publishing houses are notorious for delivering more of the same. So many rejection letters cite, “It doesn’t fit our list” or “This type of book doesn’t sell”. What they mean is, “you haven’t written another X, Y,  or Z, so we don’t want to take the risk.” Good thing is Indie authors CAN and DO take the risk, so picking up an Indie book can be very rewarding indeed. You can find something different.

The Cons? By now, the cons are as clear as that mountain I mentioned. There are books that frankly should never have been published. Books with more than the odd typo, a plethora of grammatical issues, tense inconsistencies, Mary Sues and plot holes readers can fall through.  But, it’s not as scary as some commentators would have us believe. Such books are readily identifiable, and if a reader wants to spend money and time on them, well, that’s their choice. There’s a self-published fantasy author I know of (and who shall remain nameless) who sells books like crazy. Books with a fair dose of grammatical issues, as well as a heavy sprinkling of clichés, stereotypical tropes and other writing sins. And readers can’t get enough.

But. Let’s be discerning here. We’re after quality fantasy Indie fiction after all. How can you find the gems among the turnips? Here’s some methods I’ve been exploring:

1) Find book blogs that review Indie fantasy books. Make a list of your favourites, the ones whose reading taste align most with your own, and check them on a regular basis to glean ideas about what to read next. ‘Hmmm.’ I hear you mumble. ‘Where can I find a book blog that reviews Indie fantasy fiction?’ Well, THIS blog of course! Stop reading my post and check out Anela’s reviews  here on Amid the Imaginary. They’re detailed, thoughtful, respectful and honest. She puts a lot of effort into her reviews and she has a high standard, so you’re assured of a good fantasy read. Another resource for finding Indie books is The Indie View. It collates the ‘latest Indie reviews from around the web’. Scroll through until you find some fantasy reviews.

2) Keep an eye on the Self Published Fantasy Blogoff (SPFBO 2016) organised by Mark Lawrence.  The Blogoff is a competition of sorts. 300 self-published fantasy titles are divided among ten well established fantasy book blogs, whose reviewers set to work on choosing just one book from a group of 30 to go through to the final round. This leaves us with the finalists – ten quality Indie fantasy books. Last year was the first year of the blogoff and those ten books are now on my tbr list.

3) As well as following book blogs, you might join a forum or two in which Indie books are promoted. Kboards is a big one and has a Book Bazaar where you can find the latest published works as posted by the authors, but you’ll have to search for the fantasy books, and just because they’re posted, doesn’t mean they’re going to be your idea of quality, but it’s a place to find the Indies nonetheless.

4) If you’re in the mood for doing a little window shopping from the couch, a great way to spend an hour on a Friday night, is to grab a glass of wine and just start browsing through that mountain of books on Amazon (or your site of choice).  Indie books are becoming increasingly harder to identify, as their covers are fantastic. Look for books with no ‘publisher’ listed, or ones with the author’s name as the publisher. Although, some Indies are now including their business name or imprint as the publisher as a way to further their professional look.  Most of the books in Kindle Unlimited are Indie books, so this can be another way to search for them. I’ve made my own checklist for finding those hidden gems, and I usually discover 1-3 books to add to my ‘to read’ list over at Goodreads. So, here’s my elimination checklist:

  • Title
  • Cover
  • Blurb
  • Reviews – a handful of positive and negative reviews
  • Sample – first page, just like in a bookshop!

If a book passes all of these checks, it’s added to the list. It’s amazing how many books don’t pass the ‘title’ test and this makes the author in me realise just how important the title is!

But of course, the age-old way to find a good book is word of mouth. So spill, anyone got a great Indie fantasy book to share? Or, a way to find ’em?

Thanks so much for another great post, Aderyn!

Aderyn’s latest book, The Earl’s Daughter, is the second installment in her paranormal mystery trilogy. The first book, The Viscount’s Son, is available for FREE until May 20th — Only two more days so pick up your copy today!. To find out more on Aderyn’s blog.

A Dark Paranormal Mystery Series

A Dark Paranormal Mystery Series

Michael D’Angelo doesn’t normally investigate murder, but since they never found Emma’s body, she’s technically just a missing person. But he doesn’t investigate those either.

After the Earl of Wolston reads the translation of a sinister and ancient text published on his daughter’s blog, in the days leading up to her disappearance, he reaches out to Mr D’Angelo, convinced that evil forces are at work: something beyond the ordinary, something not of this world, something unholy.

Fortunately for Michael, Paranormal Investigations are his specialty. But as Michael unravels Emma’s last days, and the secrets inscribed on her blog, he begins to question whether such knowledge is too dangerous to pursue.

About the Author

aderynFrom high fantasy to paranormal, Aderyn’s stories cover the broad spectrum of Fantasy. Inspired from childhood by the wonder and mystique of Susan Cooper’s The Dark is Rising and the adventures in Tolkien’s The Hobbit, her love of the Fantasy genre has been life long. As a writer, she brings characters and places to life in stories filled with magic, mystery, and a good dollop of mayhem.

Aderyn studied Literature, History and Creative Writing at university, travelled the world, and taught English before becoming a full-time writer. She is also a part-time farmer passionate about self-sufficiency and poultry. She lives in a cosy cottage on a small farm in Victoria, Australia with partner Peter, their dog, cat, and a little duck called Snow.

Explore her work at http://aderynwood.blogspot.com

Anatomy of a Book Cover

11 Wednesday May 2016

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Book Covers, Fantasy Art, Self Published Book

In my family there are a lot of artists. My mother can draw, sculpt, paint, sew (She can make her own chair covers and curtains. And they’re beautiful. — Who does that??). My sister is amazing at crafts, scrapbooking, wood working, and landscaping. And of course, all the women in my immediate family are great at decorating. Me? I stink at anything that requires color coordination or working with your hands. When we bought our house I looked around at the blank walls, scratched my head, then called my mom and sister to tell me what to do. I was the kid in Girl Scouts who had trouble making the Popsicle stick puppets. Yeah I can knit, but nothing with complicated patterns. If you need a scarf I can make that happen but don’t come at me with sweater requests.

Thankfully I have one saving grace: Words. My favorite toys. If it’s got an alphabet, I’m your girl. I gobble them up in books and blogs in different places and different languages. I obsessively arrange them and rearrange them like pieces in a puzzle until they make the picture I see in my head. Thus, you can imagine my despair when I completed my first book and realized I’d have to come up with an idea for a book cover. While I have a great appreciation for art and those who make it, I find myself floundering when it comes to a succinct image that encapsulates a story.

My husband — sweet supporter that he is — came up with an idea for it (saved again, woo hoo!). His skill at drawing, while still superior to mine, is yet a bit rough so I still fretted. “You don’t need it to look good,” he told me. “You just need to give your cover artist something to work with. She’ll figure out how to make it pretty.” The hubs provides me with endearing practicality when I need it most.

Here was the first sketch we sent over to my cover artist Janette Ramos. Feel free to laugh at it. We did.

sketch1

In case you need some interpretation of the stick figures above, it’s of my main character, Maleia, standing on a rocky ledge watching Syris, one of the immortal guardians of the world of Aeden, hold back a storm conjured by the Blight. What, you didn’t see that in there?;)

Janette was in fact very happy with this. Her initial sketch in reply was this:

sketch2

How she managed to pull out this image from the original speaks to her artistic talent. We went back and forth on details and colors. Her next revision with preliminary placement of the title and author name was this:

sketch3

More back and forth to tweak a few things, add a little more this, a little less that, and the final product resulted in this:

A Ransom of Flames - cover revised 2500

Janette actually flipped it around on her own, deciding it looked better at that angle. She emphasized colors, pumped up the visual of the title, defined the clothing and hair. So, from the (very) rough pencil drawing she turned it into an awesome book cover.

Need to see that comparison again?

From this:

sketch1

To this:

A deadly blight. A crownless queen. A journey to the edge of the world.

A deadly blight. A crownless queen. A journey to the edge of the world.

Janette was amazing to work with, incredibly patient, and just an all around professional. I found her on Deviantart. For a look at more of her work and other book covers she’s done, check out her site here.

Once again I’m in awe and amazement of those talented individuals who can create art. They say this self-publishing thing is all about the team you assemble to finish the product. No truer words, folks, no truer words.

Author Interview: Intisar Khanani

22 Friday Apr 2016

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Author Interview, Fantasy, Intisar Khanani, Self Published Book

IntisarI had the pleasure of interviewing Intisar Khanani, author of several amazing fantasy novels, including a wondrous short story I’ve reviewed called The Bone Knife (Read the review here. Also, it’s FREE so go download it off Amazon  |  B&N  |  Kobo  |  Apple!)

Below are my questions in italics and Intisar’s complete answers beneath them.

Can you tell us a little about yourself? Have you always wanted to be a writer?

Pretty much. I’ve been writing stories since I was four years old, stapling my books together. However, I didn’t take it seriously until I decided to step back from my career in public health (I was working on issues of infant mortality and supporting some general community health endeavors in Cincinnati). My family was growing, and I wanted to give my children extra time while they were still small, so I figured it was the perfect time to kick off a serious writing career. (I may have been a bit optimistic on what being a stay at home mom entails.) I have loved being a mom, and we are embarking on a homeschool adventure in the next year, which means my writing career starts when my kids go to bed. I love it, but I do wish I’d gotten serious like this, oh, back when I was a teenager. 😉

Do you write in any other genres outside of Fantasy?

I have written some steampunk with fantasy elements, as well as dystopian sci-fi, but neither have been published yet. I do think I’ll dabble about a bit as I continue writing, but I expect fantasy will always be a staple for me.

As a mother of small children, what do you do to fit in the time to write, especially when a solution or an idea strikes you when can’t sit at your computer?

I do 90% of my writing at night. Now that my kids are old enough to take a few classes away from home, I race to the nearest library branch to write. That daytime writing time is precious–it’s amazing how much more I can get done when I’m fresh! It’s rare that an idea strikes me that I can’t hold onto until I get to a computer–but if I just had an awesome thought, I do the old pen-and-scrap-of-paper approach. Even a few scribbled words are usually enough to get me going again after the kids are in bed.

The protagonists in your stories face many challenges. Can you speak to what themes you include in their internal struggles? Are these themes defined throughout the writing process, or ones that you have in mind at the beginning?

Ha! Yes, there are a lot of themes in my writing, but my writing does best when I allow them to develop organically. For example, Sunbolt has themes of loyalty, betrayal, and abandonment, and it also delves into issues of race and colonization. I had no idea what I was writing when I started. When I handed the first draft to my writing circle, I literally asked them, “What do you think this story is actually about?” I was over the moon when one of them responded, “Colonization of the mind.” It was there, I just didn’t see it. I did see some of the rest, but I wasn’t writing those themes, I was writing the story. Revision is where I begin to cultivate the themes inherent in the story, developing them so that they’re there for the reader who wants them.

I loved the way you integrated magic in your story The Bone Knife. It came through as a talent that the character almost unconsciously wove into her daily activities. Tell us a bit about your perception and treatment of magic as an element in fantasy books.

Magic is an interesting element to work with because there are so many ways to deal with it. I’ve found that I most enjoy books where magic has a cost. Not to say that I didn’t love Harry Potter, but the magic didn’t really seem to take anything out of the characters–which made you wonder what was holding back 200 other Voldemorts from rising up. Magic also needs to follow its own laws, rather like physics. It has to make sense within its own contexts–even “wild” magic books usually have something you can depend on about how that works. And it can’t be able to do everything for the character. I dislike books where the magic is the answer instead of the characters themselves–it should be the tool, not the solution itself.

So I clearly have some set ideas about what I like (and these are all opinions! I mean no disrespect to anyone who feels or writes differently.). But I also like to play with how magic works, make up new rules, try out different ways to use magic. In The Bone Knife, the magic-working character can’t do major spells because she’s hiding her talent…so she does a continuous outpouring of minor spells to use up the magic within her until she’s created a home where you can eat, sleep, and breath magic. This need to maintain balance, and the danger of creating such a home, is what blows her cover in the story–and makes for a fun magic system.

What prompted you to be an indie author rather than going the traditional publishing route?

I spent two years looking for an agent for my debut, a fairy-tale retelling titled, “Thorn.” Then my husband e-mailed me an article about indie publishing and the success of Amanda Hocking, and I went, hmm. I just want to share my story, and this seems a lot more likely than finding an agent. I have loved being an indie author, and haven’t looked back since!

If you could go back to when you first started publishing, what advice would you give yourself?

There are a few bits of advice I’d give myself, but then I consider that I was eight months pregnant and it really was ideal to publish before the baby was born, and all I can say is, well, you do what you can. If I’d had a longer timeline to work with, I would have made sure I didn’t settle for a cover I didn’t like, I would have done a better job developing my website and domain name, I would have tried to find and connect to supportive author communities online to help me make my release a bigger success. But sometimes you can’t do all that, and that’s okay. Sometimes, you take things one step at a time, and it’s much better than no steps at all.

Who are some of your favorite authors? Any indies?

Recently, I’ve been enjoying the works of W.R. Gingell, Andrea K. Host, and Rabia Gale. There are so many awesome authors out there, but these three are definitely high on my list of indie authors.

Tell us about your project Bookwyrms on Pinterest.

It’s just getting started! Gale, Gingell and I banded together to start sharing our favorite fantasy reads along with mini-reviews on Pinterest. It’s been cool, as I also got to introduce my two fellow authors to each other, and now I get to find out about the books that are making their day. If you’re interested, you can check out the board here: https://www.pinterest.com/rabiagale/bookwyrms/

What are you working on now? (Please say the follow up novel to The Bone Knife!)

I don’t know! I actually just finished final edits for “Memories of Ash,” the sequel to “Sunbolt.” I get my files back from the proofreader early next week, and by the end of April I should hopefully be all squared away with it. I have some scenes floating around in my head from the next book, but Rae (from “The Bone Knife”) has also been talking to me. So… I suspect I’ll jot down the scenes I’m thinking of and then pick up Rae’s story. I do best when I can flip between stories I’m working on whenever I finish a draft, to give myself space from the story, so I expect the next year will see both of these stories get written / edited. But I can’t say which will be ready first. 🙂

Thanks so much for the interview, Anela!
Thank you for taking the time to be interviewed on Amid the Imaginary!
Want to know more about this author and her work? Explore her website here
Her upcoming release, Memories of Ash (The Sunbolt Chronicles, Book Two), is coming May 30th! You can pre-order it right on Amazon for $0.99. Get it now before the price goes up at release!
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Haven’t read the first book, Sunbolt? You’re in luck! It’s ON SALE for $0.99 on Amazon, Barnes & Noble, Kobo, and Apple! This could also change when book two comes out, so go get it! I’ll be reviewing it here on the blog very soon (Spoiler: Read it in a single day. Could NOT put it down. Huge book hangover)
Sunbolt

Synopsis:

The winding streets and narrow alleys of Karolene hide many secrets, and Hitomi is one of them. Orphaned at a young age, Hitomi has learned to hide her magical aptitude and who her parents really were. Most of all, she must conceal her role in the Shadow League, an underground movement working to undermine the powerful and corrupt Arch Mage Wilhelm Blackflame.

When the League gets word that Blackflame intends to detain—and execute—a leading political family, Hitomi volunteers to help the family escape. But there are more secrets at play than Hitomi’s, and much worse fates than execution. When Hitomi finds herself captured along with her charges, it will take everything she can summon to escape with her life.

About the author:

Intisar Khanani grew up a nomad and world traveler. Born in Wisconsin, she has lived in five different states as well as in Jeddah on the coast of the Red Sea. She first remembers seeing snow on a wintry street in Zurich, Switzerland, and vaguely recollects having breakfast with the orangutans at the Singapore Zoo when she was five. She currently resides in Cincinnati, Ohio, with her husband and two young daughters.

Until recently, Intisar wrote grants and developed projects to address community health with the Cincinnati Health Department, which was as close as she could get to saving the world. Now she focuses her time on her two passions: raising her family and writing fantasy.  Intisar’s current projects include a companion trilogy to her debut, a fairytale retelling titled Thorn. The trilogy follows the heroine introduced in her free short story The Bone Knife. She is also working to complete The Sunbolt Chronicles, an epic series following a street thief with a propensity to play hero when people need saving, and her nemesis, a dark mage intent on taking over the Eleven Kingdoms.

GoodReads: http://www.goodreads.com/intisar_Khanani

Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/booksbyintisar

Twitter: http://twitter.com/BooksByIntisar

Author website: BooksByIntisar.com

Market Research: Trends in Speculative Fiction

17 Thursday Dec 2015

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Book Marketing, Dystopian, Fantasy, Paranormal, Science-Fiction, Self Published Book, Steampunk, Writing Tips

For those of you subscribed to the Amid the Imaginary newsletter, you’ll remember that I mentioned a research project I’ve been conducting. The question of my thesis: What trends or themes are in overabundance in the Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Dystopian, Paranormal, Steampunk genres.

To find the answer, I went to the book reading source: Book review blogs

Why them and not casual readers? Three reasons:

  1. They read a ton of books and are more likely to notice specific trends.
  2. They have a demonstrated passion for books.
  3. Since they write reviews for these books, their opinions reflect a greater consideration for the story than a casual reader.

The book blog community came back with awesome responses which I’ve compiled into really interesting results.

Some bits on Methodology (otherwise known as dry facts):

I surveyed 200 book blogs that review self-published books in these genres. My hope was a response rate of at least 30%. It took some time, but I received 86 replies, a response rate of a whopping 43% (Book blog peeps are the best!)

Note: I did not take the survey myself to avoid contaminating the results with bias.

As I started to compile the data, I went through and marked any answers I saw more than once, finding nineteen common answers. But some of those nineteen had only two or three blogs that identified them as trends which isn’t a strong indicator. Using a range of 20-25%, I classified a trend to be one identified by at least 17-21 blogs.

The results were fascinating. Far from the genre specific trends I expected, the main call outs crossed genres entirely, providing more evidence that it’s always about the story and the characters.

The top three categories were mentioned by 64% of surveyed blogs.

They were:

  • Romance Aspect
  • Heroes/Heroines
  • Villains

Each category contained three main points that book bloggers are fed up with. I will go over each one individually in upcoming posts to really flesh out the issues noticed. Keep an eye out for those coming soon.

Meanwhile, some points with strong indicators (20-25%) that were genre specific:

Fantasy:

  • Too many elves!
  • Too much of “The Chosen One”
  • Rushed world building/world building not well integrated with the story

Science-Fiction:

  • Captains are always human
  • Too much of the Han Solo trope (smirking rascal who pretends to only care about money but really has a heart of gold)
  • Too much emphasis on the Science and not enough on the Fiction (the dreaded research info dump vs. storytelling)

Dystopian:

  • Always takes place in the U.S. What happened to the rest of the world?
  • Lacking in diversity (or diversity found only in the bad guy/side kick)

Paranormal:

  • Too many angels!
  • Too many vampires, werewolves, zombies or fae. Try other mythology!

Steampunk:

  • Always Eurocentric. Needs to expand to other parts of the world.

If you’re an author, I am by no means saying that these results mean you should despair and dump your WIP if it includes any of the above mentioned items. I still hanker for a vampire story now and then, or a U.S. based post-apocalyptic situation. Story ideas come to writers from that mysterious ether of the imagination and strike us like lightning from the sky. That a writer should tell the story in their heart is not in question. But we should consider the practical applications of our art as well and reach for something new to weave into a plot line.

Resilience and adaptability: The seasoning of a successful author.

What do you all think about the results so far? Any thoughts on the accuracy? Have you noticed any of these trends in your own reading?

Guest Post: Self Published Fiction and the Quest for Quality

02 Wednesday Dec 2015

Posted by amidtheimaginary in Self-Publishing

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Book Marketing, Fantasy, Guest Post, Self Published Book, Writing Tips

The process of getting an idea onto the page, into a publishable book, and finally into readers hands, has many stops along the way. How does one figure out whether the finished product is ready for the world? Self-published writers, or authorpreneurs, have the added challenge of doing it all on their own. Today’s guest, author Aderyn Wood, offers a road map and some sage advice on quality control before hitting that “Publish” button. 

Take it away, Aderyn!

Self Published Fiction and the Quest for Quality

I’m an Indie author and I’m pretty passionate about self-publishing. As such, I want to support and read other indie authors. I’m always on the lookout for self-published books, fantasy in particular, that will get me turning the pages and totally immersed the way my old favourite trad pubbed books do.

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But if I’m going to be honest, the search for quality self-pubbed books is not always easy, and it seems in my quest to find some shiny gems, I often end up with a big bag of turnips. The quality varies on many levels. There’s a lot of books with interesting plots and characters, stories that would have held my interest, writing that almost made it, but just didn’t cut it quality-wise, and could have if the author had incorporated quality control measures in their writing-publishing process. As a reader, this is frustrating, as I really want to read and LOVE the work of fellow Indies.

So how can indie authors get quality control? And how do you get it without the budget of a traditional publishing house?  We don’t have a team of agents, editors, cover designers and marketers. We have to work all this out, and pay for it, ourselves. I’m by no means an expert, I’m still learning, but I’ve now incorporated strategies that help me gain some quality control in my process. And most of them cost nothing.

So, here’s a process, from writing to marketing, that helps to create the best book for the cheapest possible price – but be warned, you will have to invest some money along the way if you want a quality product.

1) Write your book.

Whether you’re a plotter or a pantser, whether you write every day or only on weekends, this is the most important step of all. Just write the damn book warts and all, and write it as quick as you can. I spent about two decades of my life saying, ‘one day I’ll write a book.’ Now, (that I’m about to start writing my sixth book) I look back and wish I’d just stopped talking about it and done it already!

2) Let the book ferment. In On Writing, Stephen King recommends locking your first draft away in a dark drawer and letting it rest, like the way we let bread dough rest between kneads. He suggests that it should sit for a minimum of six weeks. So, forget about it for a couple of months. This will allow you to read your manuscript with ‘fresh eyes’ when you return to it. Don’t let anyone see it yet. While you’re waiting, you could work on your next novel, or read some books on writing and/or editing.  There’s always more to learn and there’s plenty of good books on writing available. But keep in mind, the best way to learn more about writing, is to write.

3) Edit your book and create your second draft. Get your manuscript out of the drawer, cut out those unnecessary adverbs, make sure your POV is consistent, and tidy up your grammar. Now you’re getting it ready for someone else to read – but not the reading public, not even friends and family, not yet. 

4) Workshop your book and welcome robust critique. This can be confronting, especially for new writers. I remember the nervous butterflies when I first had my work seriously workshopped. I discovered so much about what I was doing ‘wrong’. It was how I first learnt about filtering, something I was doing a lot of, and within six months my writing had improved dramatically.

Critiquing is a wonderful part of the process where other people can pick out the flaws in your writing that your brain can’t see, but when highlighted, they become rather obvious – whether they are character inconsistencies, plot holes, places where you need to kill your darlings, or the dreaded info dump – a good group of critiquers will make such weaknesses visible for you. I find the best critquers are fellow writers, and there’s heaps of them around. While you’re at it, do some critiquing yourself. Critiquing the work of others can help you learn a lot about how to improve your own writing. There’s plenty of information around on how to find a critique group.

5) Create the third draft. Now that it’s gone through the workshop grind, you can edit and create the next draft – but it’s still not ready for publishing.

6) Get Beta readers to read it. Finally, you can ask your friends and family to read your book and give you feedback. But if you’ve written an epic fantasy novel, only ask those friends who actually read and enjoy epic fantasy. Otherwise, you’re not going to get the right kind of feedback. You should also give your beta readers a small list of specific questions that will help you get the feedback you need, otherwise you might get very general stuff like ‘it was good’, which is nice, but won’t help you much to improve it.

7) Create the fourth draft. Do yet another edit, incorporating any feedback from your beta readers that you choose to take on.  But, it’s still not yet ready for readers to buy.

8) Get an editor.  Hire a real, professional editor with actual editing qualifications who is not a friend or family member and who you DO have to pay. Everything up to this point has been free. Or would cost very little (an online subscription to a critique site might cost a small annual fee). To hire a real editor is going to cost you real money.  But you know what? This whole process can take a while. It takes me about six months, and that’s enough time to save up the money. I always budget for at least $1000 to get a real editor to edit my work. But at this point, after the manuscript has had so many other eyes on it, it’s in pretty good shape and makes the editor’s job that much easier.

Sometimes my editor has charged me less than her original quote because she didn’t have to spend as much time on it.  Joanna Penn has an extensive list of editors and editing resources on her site. However, every country, state or region will have local editors and resources available. I found my editor through my state’s association, Editors Victoria, and their freelance list – so check out your local resources too.

9) Create your final draft.  Incorporate that all-important feedback from your editor. Ok, now it is ready to face the world!

10) Send out ARCs. This is a new step for me that I’ve only just incorporated with my latest release, but it’s totally worth the time. I used to think it was somehow ‘wrong’ to ask reviewers to review your book, but that was just silly. Sending out Advanced Review Copies has been a long tradition in publishing houses, and Indies are just as entitled to employ the practice.

By contacting reviewers and politely requesting they review your book in return for a free Advanced Review Copy, you will get some early feedback, and reviews posted very quickly after publishing. One of the advantages of self-publishing is that you can modify or fix any typos, or anything else, instantly, both before and after the book has been published.  A good place to find Indie friendly reviewers is on The Indie View.

10) Publish your masterpiece. Assuming you’ve paid for a real cover art designer to create the cover – yes, this costs real money too, but not as much as hiring an editor. I usually pay no more than $200 USD for my cover art; also assuming you have gone through a rigorous process with your blurb/book description, it is time to publish!

11) Market your masterpiece. Yes, this means paying for real book sites to advertise your book, and again you have to pay with real money. But it doesn’t have to break the bank. You can spend as little as $10 – and in some instances this would be the best course e.g. if it is your first book. The more you pay (in most cases) the more return you will see. Marketing does not mean abusing social media with ‘buy my book’ posts. Something, I’m embarrassed to say, I did after my first publication. Yes, I was one of those authors who sent out way too many tweets, all focused on some kind of ‘buy my book’ message. Now I hang my head in shame about it, but at least I am fully qualified to inform you that such use (abuse) of social media has no real positive effect on sales. It’s not a surprise really; social media is awash with spam.

So that’s my process as it currently stands. I’m happy to report that I’ve had good feedback so far, in terms of my rather small number of reviews from readers who have enjoyed my books and the ‘quality’ of the finished product. But, I’m still learning, and it’s early days in my writing and publishing journey. I’m sure my ‘quality control’ process will continue to evolve. One thing I would like to do in the future (when my budget allows) is to hire an additional editor to better reflect the kind of rigorous process inherent in a traditional publishing house.

I think we indie authors owe it to ourselves, our readers and to each other to ensure that a self-published ‘label’ doesn’t equate to poor quality. I’d love to hear any ‘quality control’ tips from fellow authors – do you have a ‘quality control’ measure that works for you?  Or have you made mistakes (as I have) in your writing/publishing journey?

 

Many thanks for providing a thorough and thoughtful run-down of your process, Aderyn! I fully agree with all of these points!

Check out Aderyn Wood’s book, Currently FREE today and tomorrow only (12/2 & 12/3)! Pick up your copy while there’s time!!

The Raven (The Secret Chronicles of Lost Magic Book 1)

A lonely outcast is forced to reveal her secret Gift – but will such power bring acceptance?

A lonely outcast is forced to reveal her secret Gift – but will such power bring acceptance?

‘The Secret Chronicles of Lost Magic’ is a collection of histories that will take readers on a journey into a rich new fantasy world. Enjoy stepping into the dark days of time in this sweeping prehistoric fantasy. ‘The Raven’ is the first Chronicle in a collection set in a vibrant new world by Aderyn Wood.

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From high fantasy to paranormal, Aderyn’s stories cover the broad spectrum of Fantasy. Inspired from childhood by the wonder and mystique of Susan Cooper’s The Dark is Rising and the adventures in Tolkien’s The Hobbit, her love of the Fantasy genre has been life long. As a writer, she brings characters and places to life in stories filled with magic, mystery, and a good dollop of mayhem.

Aderyn studied Literature, History and Creative Writing at university, travelled the world, and taught English before becoming a full-time writer. She is also a part-time farmer passionate about self-sufficiency and poultry. She lives in a cosy cottage on a small farm in Victoria, Australia with partner Peter, their dog, cat, and a little duck called Snow.

http://aderynwood.blogspot.com

Explore her work:

The Raven (Latest Release, High Fantasy)

The Viscount’s Son (Paranormal novella, #1 in a trilogy)

The Borderlands: Journey (YA Contemporary Fantasy, #1 in a trilogy)

 

Blurb Doctor: A Ransom of Flames

12 Saturday Sep 2015

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With plans to publish my first book next year, I took my blurb for a check-up with the Blurb Doctor at Planetary Defense Command. Proof positive that blurbs are hard! Thanks for the prescription, doc!

Planetary Defense Command

Anela has asked me to look at the first draft of a blurb for her upcoming work, “A Ransom of Flames”.

A deadly blight. A crownless queen. A journey to the edge of the world.

A mysterious blight is destroying the world of Aeden. At the return of each full moon the Vehlek, immortal men forged by fire and stone, come to retrieve the blood sacrifice that will hold back the tide of death. For Maleia, the next sacrifice brings with it a terrible loss.

Married to the son of the man who stole her throne, she has sworn to find vengeance. But when a cure to the blight is found, Maleia decides that even without a crown, she must protect her people. Guided by the Vehlek, she undertakes a dangerous journey across the world to find it. But every day that passes, the blight grows stronger and the road…

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Guest Post: The Do’s and Don’ts of Self-Publishing From a Book Reviewer

27 Monday Jul 2015

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My guest today is Tyson Mauermann of the popular Speculative Book Review blog. As a veteran reviewer and a participant in The Great Self-Published Fantasy Blog-Off, I asked him to share any pointers he had for authors based on his experience reviewing self-published work. Below he provides some great advice:

I have been in the book reviewing game for five years now and I guess some consider me a bit of a pro. It has led to an editing gig with a few authors as well as a job with the up and coming publishing company, Ragnarok Publications. So when I was asked to come up with a guest post about the Do’s and Don’ts of self-publication it took me a little while to actually put together a small list.

THE DO’S

1. Edit. Edit. Edit.

And when you are done with that edit again to be sure. Your book might be the best thing since sliced bread but if I find several glaring errors I will put the book down and do my best to forget about it. My advice is to find a reputable editor. Some charge quite a bit but find one in your price range and use them. Better yet, use two if you can afford it. Aside from grammar they should help you with character development, story arc, and plot.

2. Give the bloggers some love

Early reviews are critical and if you can send the book to several bloggers asking for an honest review, then do it. Ask them if they would be willing to publish their review on Amazon, Goodreads, LibraryThing, Rifflebooks, and Shelfari. As long as the review is honest you should gain a better understanding of your writing. Also, don’t ask the blogger to remove or edit their negative review if you receive one. Not everyone will love your book and a few negative reviews, if they are honest, shouldn’t hurt your book as the reviewers that enjoyed your book will outshine the negative publicity.

It should be noted that I often turn down review requests based on the email an author sends me. If it is full of errors or comes off as unprofessional I tend to delete it and not look back. If the email is professional but I am swamped with books, I find the time to reply back and politely decline their review offer.

You should also make it easy for the reviewer to review your book. Have the book available in several different formats. I don’t accept PDF files as I have a Kindle but other reviewers prefer that format. Pay close attention to the contact page on their blog site. It should help you narrow down their preference and if you can’t find it ask or offer all the formats.

3. Be active

If you want to be successful in the (self) publishing game you need to be active on social media. Facebook, Twitter, and forums like SFFWorld and Reddit are a great place to start. That doesn’t mean spamming every few minutes but getting to know your fan base and taking an active role in the discussions. Places like SFFWorld have a spot to pimp your book but if you engage with the book readers and have something worthwhile to say, you will find them more receptive to trying your book. If you do gain an audience keep them informed and stay active long after your book has hit shelves.

4. Offer some free content

If you create an online profile give them a chapter or two to sample. You can generate buzz and word of mouth will quickly spread to your fan base.

THE DON’TS

1. Don’t respond to reviews

While you may receive a few nasty reviews avoid the temptation to lash out at the reviewer. I have had this happen on a few occasions. One went so far as to email my wife and threatened her to get me to remove my scathing review. Another created a sock puppet army to attack my review. I built my reputation on honest reviews regardless of how personal a relationship is with an author; it is how I became a reviewer. If you engage one reviewer you will get a negative reputation as the reviewing community is a pretty tight knit group and we do talk to one another and keep each other informed of some authors’ behaviors.

2. Search out reputable self-publishing companies

Many authors are very willing to talk to you about their personal experiences with publishing companies. There are a few that you should avoid at all costs and they will help you to sort the good from the bad.

3. Avoid blatant advertising on newsgroups and forums

Join a few sites and take an active role in it and once you have participated for a while, then you can plug your project but don’t go spamming. Nothing turns the community off more than the constant bombardment of your work. You will lose more than you gain.

4. Don’t harass reviewers

My current review queue is well beyond 100+ books. I try to review in the order received but if a book grabs my attention or I have enjoyed the previous book in the series, I will read it next. The reviewer is going to read it, it just may take a while to get to it. We have lives and sometimes it takes priority over your book. If it has been more than six months feel free to reach out to the reviewer but nothing irks me more then an author who expects me to drop everything to review their book. If the email is especially obnoxious I may even put it even further down on the review pile or reject it completely.

5. Don’t skimp on a cover

While it may seem like a bargain to grab a generic cover, a picture is still worth a thousand words. If you find the right cover you will find an audience. Also, don’t choose a cover that will get you banned. If you choose to show nudity on the cover Amazon and other major retailers will ban it. Stay classy.

6. Finally, don’t burn your bridges

You will most likely receive a few letters from agents, editors, and publishers turning down your book. That is okay. Learn from it and move on. Who knows, they may just accept your next book. A scathing letter in reply from a place that turned down your book will make your next endeavor an even steeper hill to climb, which could have been avoided.

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About Tyson:
Tyson Graduated from the Eastern Washington University and Evergreen State College with degrees in History, Geography, and Satellite Imagery Analysis. He later went back to the University of Washington to receive his Teaching Certificate and his Masters in Education. After several years of teaching English and History in public schools he was bit by the travel bug and decided to check out Asia.
At present, Tyson is a freelance editor and recently married his beautiful and intelligent wife and looking for gainful employment. 
Tyson was born and raised in Tacoma, Washington. He is constantly reading something whether it is fantasy, science fiction, history or a book that attempts to teach him something new. He loves traveling and the occasional cold, frosty beverage.

Guest Post: 5 Things No One Told Me About Being a Successful Writer

22 Wednesday Jul 2015

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The life of a writer is a challenging one. Ours is an uphill battle against self-doubt and the blank page. Throw in the business of getting our books out to readers and, well, the train can go off the rails a bit. Author, entrepreneur and podcaster Michael La Ronn offers some things to focus in on to find success.

5 Things No One Told Me About Being a Successful Writer

Authors are always looking for secrets. This article is full of them. This year, I’ll be finishing my second year as an indie author. After two years, fifteen books and countless hours of learning, there are at least a thousand things that I wish someone would have told me when I was just starting out.

This won’t be your typical self-publishing advice article. Trust me, you probably haven’t seen this advice before. If you’re looking for advice on marketing, writing a bestseller, or finding readers, you won’t find it here. There are a ton of resources out there. The writing posts on Anela’s blog are a good start. What I’m going to teach you comes BEFORE all of that.

Let’s talk about what really matters: how to plan for your eventual success.

#1: Focus on the Fundamentals

OK, so I lied a little. You know the first lesson already: it’s all about the storytelling. When you’re just starting out, this is very easy to ignore. You’re going to chase after shiny things: sales, advertisements, reviews, social media, experimental promotion techniques, shortcuts, anything that will help you sell a ton of books and quit your crappy day job. You’ll invest so much time in these things that your writing time will suffer. Pretty soon, an entire year will be over and you won’t have anything to show for it but a lot of money spent on things that didn’t make you any money at all.

New authors never believe me when I tell them this. I got laughed at a few months ago when I gave this advice to a writing group, actually. They’re going to learn this lesson the hard way.

The first thing YOU must do, above all others, is commit yourself to producing more books regularly, faster, and better. Think about it like this: if you buy an ad and it doesn’t sell any books, you’re going to regret it. You’ll especially regret it if you buy a bunch of ads that don’t perform. Will you ever regret publishing a new book? Ten? Twenty? Never.

When I stopped chasing shiny things that didn’t matter and focused solely on writing more books, I got the sales I had been trying to chase before. My sales doubled. Not kidding.

#2: Develop a learning plan

Remember in school when teachers passed out a syllabus with all the things you were going to learn in the class?There’s no set syllabus for being a writer, but I developed one for myself. It’s a very, very long bulleted list that covers virtually every element of the writing craft and business. I systematically knock things off the list one by one. I’m continuously adding to it every time I encounter something that I want to learn. It’s a living document that will never truly be conquered, but every time I cross something off the list, I’m more in control of my career.

In this business, the most successful indie authors are the ones who are the most knowledgeable. You must spend the time and money on your own continuing education, or you won’t last very long.

The worst thing you can do is look at something and think, “I’ve got a good grip on that. I don’t need to learn anymore” (or some variation on that thought). If such a thought ever crosses your mind, chances are you probably haven’t even begun to understand how it really works. Guaranteed. I can’t tell you how many times I thought I “knew” something about writing (pacing, storytelling, character development), only to discover, embarrassingly while running my mouth in the presence of professional authors, that I actually didn’t know anything at all.

There are many layers to learning. Start educating yourself and never stop. And stay humble. It’s good for you.

#3: The best business advice comes from non-writers

While you should absolutely pay attention to how successful indie authors are conducting their businesses and implement what makes sense for you, you should pay more attention to other businesspeople and how they do it. Reality television is great for this. For example, I recently watched two seasons of “Hotel Impossible” on Netflix. It follows Anthony Melchiorri, a famous hotelier who travels to struggling hotels around the world. He shows them the reasons they’re struggling and how to fix them. He’s brutally honest sometimes overbearing, but he knows his stuff.

Almost all of Anthony’s advice on “Hotel Impossible” can be applied to writers. In fact, I learned more from two seasons of “Hotel Impossible” than all the writing business books, blogs and podcasts I consumed previously. The best way to learn how business truly works is to approach it from odd angles. Look at the music industry. Listen to interviews with entrepreneurs like Jim Henson, Walt Disney, Mark Cuban, etc. Watch shows like Hotel Impossible and Shark Tank. Take nuggets from their advice and apply it to your situation. This will give you a clarity that other writers won’t have. You’ll learn the true fundamentals of running a business. You’ll also be able to identify the critical mistakes that your contemporaries are making and how to avoid them for yourself.

#4: If you don’t manage your fear, it will manage you

So much of being a writer is about overcoming fear. Here’s a secret: just about every mental struggle you will have will be rooted in some kind of fear. Worried about your sales? That’s fear. Don’t think that readers will like your work? That’s fear. Think it’s impossible to write a novel in one draft without revision? Yep, fear.

Dean Wesley Smith, an indie writer I admire, says all the time that there’s nothing to be afraid of in this industry. It’s true. Any fear you have is imagined. It’s not real. It took me a long time to learn this, but when I did, I skipped light-years ahead. I highly recommend Dean’s “Killing the Sacred Cows of Publishing” series. Read the books in that series several times and internalize them.

Learn how to be fearless. Stand up for your art and believe in yourself. Keep the fear at bay, and you’ll be surprised at what you can accomplish.

#5: You’re always going to be impatient about something

Namely, sales. But they’re not going to come at first, and that’s okay. Use your first few years to cement your understanding of the writing craft and business. The beginning of your career is the best time to fail. No one will ever see or care about your mistakes. That’s a wonderful thing. In your early years, focus on laying the groundwork for your eventual success. This means developing your learning plan and embracing it. This way, when you reach success, you’ll be ready for it.

Have a vision for the next five and ten years. This is hard when you’re just starting out, but as you release more books, you’ll be able to see the future more clearly. I already know what books I’m going to be publishing in the next two years because I have a greater vision of what I want my overall catalog to look like. As that vision slowly becomes a reality, I am confident that readers are going to love my books. But it’s going to take a lot of work to get there, and it’s hard NOT to be impatient.

Fighting impatience never gets any easier. It’s actually a good thing because as long as you don’t give up, it will keep you hungry.

Bringing It All Together

The above lessons are just a few of the many lessons I have learned. Here’s the recap:

  • Focus on storytelling and writing craft above all things
  • Develop a learning plan for yourself so that you can keep growing
  • Learn business advice from people outside the writing industry and apply what makes most sense for your situation
  • Overcome your fears or it’ll hold you back
  • Deal with impatience and use it as fuel

You’ll be able to avoid most career-ending mistakes if you follow my advice. This will ensure that you’ll be ready to embrace your success when it arrives. If you keep writing, reading and learning like I am doing, you’ll get there eventually.

Here’s to your success!

I want to thank Anela for inviting me to do a guest post on this blog. I had a lot of fun writing this.

Many thanks to you for such an insightful article!

The future is bright, But the past will kill you. Currently FREE on the Kindle

The future is bright,
But the past will kill you.

Michael La Ronn

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Michael La Ronn writes fearless fiction. His novels feature unlikely heroes such as teddy bears and vegetables, and his writings are filled with quirky and imaginative humor. He also co-hosts the To Be Read Podcast where he talks about the books he’s reading. You can find him at www.michaellaronn.com.

Ways & Means: Crowdfunding

19 Sunday Jul 2015

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Okay, so you’ve finished the final draft of your book and are now staring down the expenses of getting an editor, a book cover, formatting costs, an ISBN and a potential marketing bill…Now what? While it would be nice if we could effectively break into this self-publishing thing with just a ponytail and a dream, it does require some investment. Time, obviously, but also dollars. If you’re like me and the dollars are short (well, time is too, but that’s another story), it’ll take a little creativity to come up with the rest. The alternative is to annoy the holy hell out people by asking for money while offering nothing in return, and that never works out well.

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Crowdfunding is one such avenue to get your project where it needs to go. For better illustration I’ll use an active campaign that’s going on right now by writer/poet Bonnie Jo Stufflebeam. She is currently fundraising through Kickstarter for an album of fiction read by actors and accompanied by original compositions performed by professional musicians. Married to a composer, this is a collaborative project between them. The title of the album is “Strange Monsters”, and the theme revolves around women’s voices.

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Essentially, crowdfunding is a three step process:

1. The Appeal

First, every campaign needs a video. For those shrinking violets out there I’m sure this sounds like a nightmare come true but summon your courage and don’t worry. People are interested in your project and just want a more personal look at who they’re pledging their money to. Don’t let a little video scare you off. You don’t need to be Spielberg to get this done. Most are people speaking directly into the camera about their project.

Bonnie

Aside from the video, you’ll need a compelling write up. For Kickstarter, this appears below your video. Be sure to keep your paragraphs short and to the point, maybe throw in a bit of humor and humility. People like that. Bonnie’s write up includes pictures as well. Always a good idea to break up block type with some visuals. It also offers a free listen to one of the tracks of the project album. Click here to check it out!

2. Know how much you’ll need

Before you launch this lovely appeal, you’ll need to estimate with some accuracy how much you’ll need for your project. This is essential so your contributors know you’ll be organized with the money they give and can be assured the project will succeed.

Bonnie does a great job of this by illustrating exactly where the money will go:

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In that sum you’ll need to add the cost of running your crowdfunding campaign, so be sure to assess those expenses and pad your total $$$ goal. Aside from Kickstarter fees, what are these crowdfunding costs, you ask?

3. Incentives

Family and friends will usually chip in to your campaign but you’ll need more to catch the interest of others outside your immediate circle. Incentives are the carrot of crowdfunding. These can really take any form but should be something people would actually want, from as little as a personalized thank you note/email, to an ebook or a signed paper copy of the book. Sending these out to contributors will require money in printing and shipping costs so be sure to factor that in. Be realistic about your incentives as well. You don’t want them to eat into the actual funds you need for the project.

Bonnie’s campaign has some great incentives at various contribution levels, along with an estimated delivery date (always important!). Depending on the pledge level, some of her incentives include MP3s, signed sheet music, recording time in their studio, photo book/story companion, contributor name listed on the website, etc.

One final note:

If you use Kickstarter as the crowdfunding platform, you have to reach at least 100% of your goal amount to get any of the pledges. In other words, if you don’t get 100% of your goal by your deadline, then you get nothing, so it’s important to know your specific amount needed.

Here are a couple of good knowledge articles for Kickstarter:

http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2013/04/01/10-things-kickstarter-book_n_2993825.html

http://www.thedominoproject.com/2012/06/why-kickstarter-campaigns-fail.html

And here is an article about crowdfunding in general including other platforms (Indiegogo, Crowdfunder, Flattr) that don’t require that 100% goal attainment. They’ll give you whatever was pledged regardless of if you make it or not, however they don’t have the same reach as Kickstarter, but their network is still wide:

http://www.selfpublishingadvice.org/crowdfunding/

For those familiar with crowdfunding, they recommend being prepared to commit a lot of time and effort to it while it’s running. With 12 days to go on her Kickstarter campaign, Bonnie can vouch for this wisdom:

“Having had one successful smaller Kickstarter previously, I knew what to expect, sort of, when putting together the Kickstarter for my collaborative fiction-music album Strange Monsters. I knew that you need a video, no matter what. I knew that the pledges would come mostly at the beginning and the end of the project. I knew all the things Kickstarter tells you: that you’ll have to rely on friends and family to get things started, that you should have stretch goals, that you should vary your message and ask people directly to donate money. Having just secured a job as Marketing Manager for a small press, I also thought I knew how to market the Kickstarter to get people interested. Trial and error has become a close friend.

What I didn’t realize was just how much work running a larger Kickstarter was going to be. Since launch 15 days ago, I’ve been spending nearly every waking minute sending out emails, engaging people on Twitter and Facebook. And while it’s wonderful to see so many people sharing the project on Facebook and Twitter—it really makes me feel supported—the best results have come from asking people directly, through email or a message on Facebook, to donate even just $1. (The more backers you have, the better your project looks, and a lot of people can spare $1.) I also received an upsurge in donations when I unveiled several new rewards, so it might be a good idea to hold back one-two rewards to offer mid-campaign.

I’m still learning, of course. And the campaign isn’t over yet! I imagine I’ll learn a few things more in those final days and hours.”

Many thanks to Bonnie Jo Stufflebeam for being the crowdfunding guinea pig for this post! Be sure to check out her amazing project, “Strange Monsters”, on Kickstarter, an album blending fiction and music. And if you’re able, send some dollars her way. As all of us know, it’s a creative community we’re in and sometimes you just need a little boost to achieve your dreams.

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Author Interview: Eric Dallaire

10 Friday Jul 2015

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It was my pleasure to interview Eric Dallaire, author of the thought provoking and action packed Science-Fiction novel “Shades: The Gehenna Dilemma”, an awesome book that I recommend everyone check out ASAP! For the full review, click here

Below are my questions in italics followed by Eric’s complete, unaltered answers.

Could you tell us a little bit about yourself?

Hello Anela! First, thanks so much for inviting me to interview on your blog.  I’m a fan of the site and appreciate what you do for self-published authors. THANK YOU!

I’ve worked in the video game industry since 1995 as a writer, producer, and game designer. After graduating from UCSD (biology and writing degrees) I started working at Presto Studios. Back then, I worked on The Journeyman Project, a classic time travel adventure game on CD-ROM (similar to Myst). The challenge in those days for interactive writers was to craft engaging stories with branching multi-linear plotlines that altered the story as the player made gameplay choices.

In early 2000, I was fortunate to work as a writer for several Star Trek Next Generation games. One of my biggest thrills was having Patrick Stewart and Brent Stewart read my lines for a game script (I still have the signed shooting scripts framed!).

In 2006, I took some time away from the video game industry for a passion project. I formed TeachTown with three other great co-founders with the mission to create online learning activities for children with special needs.

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After launching TeachTown, I returned to making video games and worked at Electronic Arts on games like The Simpsons on the Wii and Nintendo DS and Pogo Games for the iPhone.

What do you do when you’re not writing? Do you have a day job as well?

When I want to get away from tech and relax, I enjoy running, surfing, and spending time with my son! I enjoy reading – print books when I’m at home, and when I’m traveling I take my Kindle paperwhite. I try to balance classic books with current fantasy and science fiction.

During the work week, I do have a day job. I’m a game designer for a company called Age of Learning. My main duties include design documentation for learning activities, drafting up wireframes for game mechanics, crafting narrative stories, and generally sketching up fun concepts for games that promote education. The last project I worked on was a mobile application that taught English to foreign students.

The next project hasn’t been announced yet, but has a broader scope for using games to help teach critical concepts to a wide variety of students. I’m a big fan of using game theory and motivating principles, intertwined with fun stories, to engage students of all ages to learn. I write whenever I can, mostly nights and weekends. My commute allows me to take a train to work, which I love! Every trip feels like a mini-adventure and there’s something about being on a train that stimulates my imagination.

Has writing always been a passion of yours or one that came over time?

Yes! I’ve been writing since I was seven years old. My first story was done in crayon with stick figures and featured a little known side adventure of Bilbo Baggins (little known since I imagined it). My father introduced me to science fiction at an early age. We watched Star Trek together and I read many of his golden age science fiction books. He reared me on names like Asimov, Heinlein, Pournelle, AE van Vogt, Niven, Bear, and the greats of that age.

At school, I was fortunate to grow up around friends who also enjoyed writing. All of us wrote short stories, or wrote adventures for our tabletop gaming group. This taught me the importance of writer group collaborations at an early age, and sharing your stories with peers to receive honest feedback.

One Christmas I received an Atari 400, It was the computer that had the fancy membrane flat keyboard. I wrote a fantasy choose-your-own adventure story and challenged my friends to get to the end of it. They loved controlling the story, and seeing those reactions and watching people get involved in my story made me happy. I knew then that I wanted to be a storyteller.

Do you usually write in the Science-Fiction genre or do you delve into other genres as well?

I’m interested in science fiction across all sub-genres, and fantasy of all genres. I subscribe to the belief that at some level the genres really can blur together. Jack Vance’s Dying Earth blended science and magic together effectively. As did Dragonriders of Pern (the dragons were genetically engineered). In Shades, you’ll see this influence in the later chapters with the v-cast game meta.duel, where cutting age VR technology is used to create realistic fantasy constructs.

In “Shades”, zombies serve as de facto slaves and are owned by businesses and individuals as property. They are more tragic creatures than frightening (though there is some of that too!). Was this an allegory for the way debt can destroy lives in our world today? Can you expound a bit on how this idea evolved in the creative process of the book?

Great question. I agree with your assessment, shades are absolutely pitiable tragic characters….to some! I made a point in the book to emphasize that opinions remained split about the near certainty that most middle class people faced the eventual fate of becoming shades. Some fought against it, seeking out lawyers to help them avoid their debts. Others decided to break the law and asked their kin to hide their bodies. This created an industry of debt collectors, called ghouls that went after these lawbreakers.

Given today’s commercialism, I also predicted that some people would not care about their bodies after their deaths. Less altruistic than organ donors, these people would sell their bodies in the future for cash now. It is an indictment on general greed that can exist in some people’s hearts, but the story also highlights the compassion and hope that keeps many of us going in difficult times.

More and more, the economies of today rely on debt and risky ventures to fuel their economy. I think Shades and the concept of future debt is a relatable concept to many readers because it’s such a constant part of current society. The recent economic crisis in Greece is just one more recent example of this cycle of how debt can affect people on an individual scale and at a state level.

There is a lot of hacker and tech jargon in the story, giving it that delightful Sci-Fi feeling readers enjoy. Do you have a background in tech at all? If not, what steps did you take to learn the needed vocabulary to give it a realistic feel in the book?

Long ago, in my college life, I studied biology, doing Alzheimer’s research for UCSD. I did writing on the side for a friend’s video game company. It turned out, I was a much better writer and game designer than a scientist. However, I LOVED science and I was able to use my technical background to write for Star Trek games, which I think many of your readers will agree, is sort of the king and queen of technical jargon.

As my career gravitated more toward programming and game design, my writing evolved to include more of those technical aspects. Unlike my main character Jonah, I’m not an expert hacker. While writing Shades, I asked several senior computer-programming colleagues, who are all much smarter than I am, to read the book as scientific advisors. They informed me if I wrote anything that sounded incorrect from a technical point of view. This helped to ground the book’s invention of new programming terms, like the echelon programs, with plausible descriptions and mechanics.

The story also speaks to the philosophical question of what qualifies as a “person”, especially when it comes to artificial intelligence. Do you feel this is a question we could potentially face one day?

I’m so glad you brought this point up! The idea of ‘what is sentience’ and ‘what is human’ are both major themes throughout the book. In the story, the public is told that shades are not alive and possess no souls. Over the years, this has becomes an ingrained truth to the public. Early on, only criminals and major debtors are forced to take the shade serum to pay for their crimes and debts. Twenty years after the serum is introduced, afterdeath service becomes a form of currency to the wider public as a way of generating income. A growing minority, roughly a quarter of the populace, are comfortable enough to mortgage their afterdeath years to purchase goods in their lifetime.

The book also deals with the consequences of the virtual world on humankind. More and more, people outside the United States and shade-dealing countries rely on virtual casting, or v-casting, to do business in places that allow the shade-trade. V-casting is form of projected tele-presence, or combining Skype with 3-d printing. You can hook up to a machine at home, and transmit your mind to another place with the help of local WiFi-like terminals that have become ubiquitous in this world. Most law-abiding citizens treat v-casters as real people. There are some that enjoy the v-cast system as a recreational hobby, and there are others that allow their minds to stay in the online worlds constantly, almost evolving into a new type of incorporeal life form. I really enjoyed delving into the psychology of how these technologies would affect different people. I think that level of detail helps to make the book feel more realistic.

From my point of view, I do think that online presence and gaming is becoming an even larger part of life, and we are seeing this affect the culture and lifestyles of people around the world. If you look at this year’s recent E3, Microsoft’s recent Hololens technology is taking us closer to Virtual and augmented reality than ever before. Additionally, the world of Shades does tackle the issue of artificial intelligence. In the novel’s backstory, an event took place where a group of AIs went berserk and killed humans. This led to the ratification of the Promethean Laws that restricted how sentient AIs operate, think, and evolve. Essentially, it became an insurance program against a singularity event (where AIs take over the planet) from happening. In a very direct way, it is a repression of the artificial life form.

Personally, I share the concern with other futurists that we should be cautious in our constant drive to create living computers. More discussion on the ethics and ramifications of sentient AIs should continue at a faster pace. I find this topic fascinating and it’s a strong theme throughout Shades. In this book, when thinking robots were outlawed, corporations turned to the shades to fill in the ranks of hard-laborers. It allowed for a rich backstory of corporate espionage and politics.

When it comes to drafting your books, are you a “pantser” or a “plotter”? And do you think once is preferable over the other?

I’m a hybrid, I do some plotting along the way for sure. But if I had to pick one, it would be more pantser. When I imagined Shades, the concept stemmed from a conversation I was having with a friend about debt and working. We were discussing how more people these days worked into their later years and how retirement continued to be pushed back for our generation. I joked that I would be working up until the day I died and that even then someone from the IRS would probably come to my funeral to dig me up to work a few more years. After I made that joke, the first quarter of the book flooded into my brain – I had to go write the first chapter immediately!.

After I calmed down a bit, I planned out the major milestones of the book. To do that, I used Keynote as an initial planning tool. While it is presentation software, it’s also an excellent wireframing and planning tool. Each slide in my project file was like a ‘notecard’ for me, with an important plot element, scene, or chapter on its own page. I could easily move these cards around in the panel view while I considered my plot flow. I even used Keynote’s simple Shape tool to draw out locations like the moon colonies and Jonah’s apartment to help me visualize locations.

Even though I did some planning, my plotting was at a high level. I filled in most of the details as I dove back into more seat-of-the-pants-writing. Several of the characters, like the White Djinn, evolved on the fly while writing about the virtual realm. Another example: in my early notes, the AI character Sasha was a minor character, but as I started to write, her personality demanded more attention and I followed her lead. To me, writing is an ebb and flow between planning and inspiration. I found it to be an organic process. Around the three-quarter mark, I returned to more detailed planning when I needed to tie together different plot points and drive to a satisfactory conclusion.

One additional note: I took a software development-like approach to my writing. I sent chapters over to friends at an early stage of my writing. I would write, get feedback, iterate, and send back revisions for more feedback. I also did this as a test – if my early readers came back and asked for more chapters, I knew I had something. Getting feedback along the way helped me catch errors, validate concepts I wanted to try out, and generally gave me a sense about the direction I was going. This was a personal style choice for me. I know that some writers (and several in my writing group) prefer to do a full rough draft before showing their work to anyone. I say go with whatever works for you!

Why did you decide to self-publish versus going through traditional publishing route?

I’ve created two companies in the past, both software companies. One was an education company that helped children with special needs and autism. The other was a more traditional games studio that made mobile games. That same entrepreneurial spirit pushed me to tackle the challenge of creating a book and treating it like my own business. It’s exciting (and a bit scary) to have complete ownership of taking the book from page one to finish, hiring an editor, hiring a cover artist, and then marketing. As most self-published authors will confirm, it’s a tremendous amount of work. I had plenty of days of self-doubt and I worried about decisions. However, I was fortunate that I knew many talented friends who helped and encouraged me along the way. For instance, the cover artist, Ron Lemen, was an early reader and fan of the book. I also worked with him years ago at Presto Studios. He created a gorgeous cover and helped define the look of that world. So, relying on my extended family of friends and trusted contacts has allowed me to build an extended team of contributors.

When can we hope to see the sequel of “Shades”??

I’m working on a sequel alongside several smaller short story pieces. The way my brain works, sometimes I need to recharge the batteries with a quick fresh project to get short amount of distance from a larger novel. I feel like this allows a writer to come back with more perspective and new ideas about how to proceed with a sequel. I just wrote two short stories that I have submitted for publication, and now I have returned to writing the Shades sequel. I have a trilogy planned, an audiobook version of Shades that I’m exploring, and I’m speaking with interested artists about a graphic novel adaptation of the story. With the pace I’m going, Shades: Civil War will be coming out early next year.

Many thanks to Eric Dallaire for taking the time to be interviewed on Amid the Imaginary!

And thank you Anela, it’s been a true pleasure speaking with you! I appreciate your time and consideration, and of course for all your support of the authors you feature!

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